Hookers & Hangers Blogfest July 16th & July 18th
We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!
On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.
On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.
Post as many as you like!
We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!
On July 16th, post the first sentence from each chapter.
On July 18th, post the last sentence from each chapter.
Post as many as you like!
We will be judging everyone’s first three HOOKERS and first three HANGERS. We’ll each pick two winners (MOST ENTICING HOOKER and MOST IMPOSSIBLE HANGER) making a total of ten winners! Winners will receive a 10 page (double spaced) critique and a Friday Spotlight on FFF!
This is my submission to the Hookers and Hangers Blogfest hosted by Falling 4 Fiction. Today I'll be posting my first three hookers for my zombie novella w.i.p. Nevermore. Hope they keep you wanting even more.
Chapter One: Peter Pan shot another zombie in the head.
Chapter Two: Peters' eyes roamed the hottest zombie he had ever seen.
Chapter Three: Louds' hands dug into Peters' naked chest, "Need something Miles...Tink?"
Summary: In a world full of zombies, survivors have to do whatever it takes to survive. Peter Pan and his crew of Lost Boys scavenge the ruins of Detroit for food, ammunition and anything else they can find. Their leader being immune gives them a great advantage. Then a new girl comes along, Tinker Bell. Her affliction divides them and when an accident gets Sebastian Hook on their trail things turn even deadlier than they already are. How do you defeat an enemy who can control the very thing that scares you most?
There is my submission to Monday's blogfest. Wednesday will be all about the hangers at the end of each chapter that makes us have to read what happens next.
Peter Pan and Zombies ... cool. My hookers go up at one minute after midnight.
ReplyDeletePeter Pan and zombies...OMG how effing awesome is that?!?! I love your hookers. I'd so read this book. :D
ReplyDeleteThat is one of the coolest book concepts I've heard in a long time! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI'm never going to be able to watch Disney's Peter Pan the same way again. :D
ReplyDeletePeter Pan shot another zombie in the head. - well if this isn't the best hook I've head in a long time, I don't know what is.
ReplyDeleteAnd the concept of your story is fantastic, I cannot wait to hear more about it.
Peter pan and zombies! Awesome. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteDark and twisted. I love 'em!
ReplyDeleteYou always come up with the coolest ideas! Freaky picture. Going to have nightmares! Thanks a lot.
ReplyDeleteAnd I agree with everyone... these are some great hookers!!!
This is great! Your premise sounds so crazy funny! Wonderful hookers!!
ReplyDeleteOh man, this story idea is AMAZING! And I love all 3. #1 and 2 are awesome. Who knew zombies could be hot. Can't wait to read your hangers!!
ReplyDeleteI love your concept! And the hookers are awesome. Great opening line.
ReplyDeleteI love the first one especially! Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh.My.HECK!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!!!
love this twisted slant on peter pan & tink! gross & entertaining!
ReplyDeleteThis is so intriguing. I'm so curious!!!
ReplyDeleteLike the first one especially but they all rock and sounds like a great idea!
ReplyDeleteHoly crap this story sounds amazing! That first line of the book is fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like an awesome twist on Peter Pan! Very intriguing. I have to agree that that is a great opening line. :D
ReplyDeleteWhat a mix, Peter Pan and Zombies, I never would have thought of it! I like #1.
ReplyDeleteSheena Kay! Those are awesome! I'm jealous, but I still love ya!
ReplyDeleteWow, that certainly is an inventive re-telling of the classic...
ReplyDeleteI love that this is Peter Pan, and that you said there was a hot zombie. Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteLove your first line up there, awesome stuff!
ReplyDeleteI would never have thought of this concept and premise!!
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