Original Mock Cover
New Mock Cover
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So? What do you think?
And here's the summary to better show the extent the change helps. You can also click here for a full list and to read on some changes including the addition of the fifth novella (mock cover only).
Summary: Jessica Hatfield lives a life of decadence She gets up everyday to be pampered and cared for. At age fifteen she will be sacrificed. She wants to but what of those who don't?
Joseph Rowe doesn't believe in The Giving. A ceremony in which every year two teens are sacrificed after living fifteen years of luxury. Refusal means banishment to the wastelands and no return to Chance City. Can he really go against what he was raised to do? To believe?
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I love it! Good for you for making that change.
ReplyDeleteI think the finished product is worth it :)
For me both covers are good, but the second is more elegant. It's little intriguing. Greetings for You :)
ReplyDeleteI definitely prefer the second mock cover, although I'd alter the font. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteI like the new title! It does fit better. And you want unique - less competition when people are searching for your book.
ReplyDeleteOh nice! I like it!
ReplyDeleteOh, I love it Sheena. Definitely like the new name and cover.
ReplyDeleteI like it. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThe second cover is definitely more elegant, and the concept? Awesome.
ReplyDeleteChange is good! I usually kick around a few different ideas for cover art. This one is good. I like it very much.
ReplyDeleteI like the new title. It stirs more curiosity. I would make your name and title stand out more by changing the font.
ReplyDeleteI don't like the font you use on the title. But the picture is great.
ReplyDeleteYay! Change is exciting. :)
ReplyDeleteVery cool! I like the changes.
ReplyDeleteI like Deadly Luxury much better. Much more intriguing. Might I suggest on the real cover, you make that title bigger? Love the title and it needs to pop out.
ReplyDeleteThe title is better and the simple cover design works well. Elizabeth is right, and both the title and your name should pop out.
ReplyDeleteGreat changes! Simple is good.
ReplyDeleteThe new title definitely fits better. :-)
ReplyDeleteYes, I think the change is successful, although the design of the covers I like both!
ReplyDeleteRun with it. Looks good! :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful image and excellent story blurb! exciting!!
ReplyDeleteI like both the new cover and title. I'm thinking of renaming the novel I'm revising too. Right after I named it Meg Cabot came out with a book in the same genre with the same name... Original is good!
ReplyDeleteThe blurb makes me want to read it right now :)
Sometimes changing a book's title can mean a world of difference. I hope it works for you. By the way, I'm now following you through Bloglovin.
ReplyDeleteLike the new title and cover - although I thought the first cover was good too :)
ReplyDeleteSuzanne @ Suzannes-Tribe
I like the concept and the pic, and the plot is intriguing. The backdrop could be a different color, and the font could be different and larger. The new name is definitely better. :) Writer’s Mark
ReplyDeleteI think you made an excellent decision in changing the title of your book. I do think your new mock cover could use a better font as noted by our good friend, Michael.
ReplyDeleteA peaceful remainder of the weekend to you.
Gary, yes that one! :)