tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post6387297268832178523..comments2024-03-29T01:22:34.762-05:00Comments on QueendSheena: My Entry for the 2nd Annual Flash Fiction BlogfestSheena-kay Grahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-55916840147741402782012-05-25T06:58:19.728-05:002012-05-25T06:58:19.728-05:00I liked the "canary colored savior" line...I liked the "canary colored savior" line.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-49525941638875035022012-05-24T11:55:22.708-05:002012-05-24T11:55:22.708-05:00I really enjoyed this story. There is a sprinkling...I really enjoyed this story. There is a sprinkling of background and great voice. Well done!<br /><br />I'll announce the finalists tomorrow.Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-46335065433105606472012-05-23T23:29:34.563-05:002012-05-23T23:29:34.563-05:00I agree about trig tests. ;-) Like others have alr...I agree about trig tests. ;-) Like others have already noted, it's wonderful how, in this moment of crises, the good in people came to the fore.<br /><a href="http://minalobo.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Some Dark Romantic</a>Mina Lobohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10173895884776280826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-57187594969446353812012-05-23T22:07:31.872-05:002012-05-23T22:07:31.872-05:00Very touching story. It's refreshing to read a...Very touching story. It's refreshing to read about someone helping others.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-64420746791862731892012-05-23T21:51:28.289-05:002012-05-23T21:51:28.289-05:00I loved this post. You captured your main characte...I loved this post. You captured your main character beautifully.Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-4974695159823864492012-05-23T11:16:40.439-05:002012-05-23T11:16:40.439-05:00Wow! You do a great job of involving us in your ma...Wow! You do a great job of involving us in your main character from the beginning through the end . .. great story!Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-87128887521816560082012-05-23T07:08:46.437-05:002012-05-23T07:08:46.437-05:00Wonderful story and glad it had a happy ending. ye...Wonderful story and glad it had a happy ending. yes, calamities bring out the best and worst in people.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-75789511465846436342012-05-22T23:50:26.506-05:002012-05-22T23:50:26.506-05:00Excelent descriptions. I could feel it.
I too liv...Excelent descriptions. I could feel it.<br /><br />I too live in the path of 'the storm'- STX.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-6972482622853930812012-05-22T20:30:51.159-05:002012-05-22T20:30:51.159-05:00I love that their savior had Down's Syndrome. ...I love that their savior had Down's Syndrome. People tend to not think about what people CAN do even with disabilities.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-55620123356180374952012-05-22T13:30:54.892-05:002012-05-22T13:30:54.892-05:00I love the way the story ended. I have the feeling...I love the way the story ended. I have the feeling the narrator has learned a lot from going through the storm.Mary Maddoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11804303876835029488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-36801323872813141562012-05-22T13:06:12.198-05:002012-05-22T13:06:12.198-05:00Thank goodness for that GPS, eh?Thank goodness for that GPS, eh?Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-32609972198063747482012-05-22T07:47:17.590-05:002012-05-22T07:47:17.590-05:00deeper meaning! wonderful story!deeper meaning! wonderful story!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-52043297962103155662012-05-22T03:59:30.893-05:002012-05-22T03:59:30.893-05:00Excellent use of the prompt. You could feel the te...Excellent use of the prompt. You could feel the tension of Brenda and her mother throughout, and I let out a sigh of relief when Joshua showed up.Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102199553293874800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-62393112038442031882012-05-21T22:22:16.654-05:002012-05-21T22:22:16.654-05:00Love how well you developed your characters in suc...Love how well you developed your characters in such a short piece!Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-11891101055896660732012-05-21T20:21:58.526-05:002012-05-21T20:21:58.526-05:00Such a beautiful story in so many ways!Such a beautiful story in so many ways!Heather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-28308687188454793322012-05-21T15:22:29.656-05:002012-05-21T15:22:29.656-05:00Having braved several hurricanes, I can totally fe...Having braved several hurricanes, I can totally feel the tension here. Thanks for the story.VonLCidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05792116471895008377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-13485050592326259252012-05-21T12:59:06.384-05:002012-05-21T12:59:06.384-05:00Very dramatic story! It made me like the character...Very dramatic story! It made me like the character a lot that she went back for her mother. Best of luck in the blogfest! :)A.L. Sonnichsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358456786727534289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-39967994030131415662012-05-21T12:12:24.103-05:002012-05-21T12:12:24.103-05:00Good job on this! :DGood job on this! :DKyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-67028711599934669242012-05-21T11:42:25.799-05:002012-05-21T11:42:25.799-05:00Thank you for entering my 2nd Annual Flash Fiction...Thank you for entering my 2nd Annual Flash Fiction Blogfest! The six finalists will be announced on Friday, May 25th. I will further comment on your entry on Thursday.Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.com