tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post6319169847385706136..comments2024-03-28T03:53:12.942-05:00Comments on QueendSheena: WIP MemeSheena-kay Grahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-46599532175273719582012-08-22T09:16:14.385-05:002012-08-22T09:16:14.385-05:00Love her name...hehe. It's so pretty.
And I a...Love her name...hehe. It's so pretty. <br />And I agree with other commenters, your banter is excellent, but let the exposition reveals unfold at a less hurried pace. Elizabeth Seckmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00045076826326574984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-19483334366039814322012-08-22T08:37:29.994-05:002012-08-22T08:37:29.994-05:00I'd like to know why Cassie takes a different ...I'd like to know why Cassie takes a different path and if she can really survive life as human.Peaches Ledwidgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13406881743264774589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-85832525344305018102012-08-21T17:06:46.434-05:002012-08-21T17:06:46.434-05:00I love when friendships are a big part of a book. ...I love when friendships are a big part of a book. And the premise sounds like it has lots twists! Jenny S. Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00482342313938669366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-42344854169833868522012-08-21T10:23:48.850-05:002012-08-21T10:23:48.850-05:00I agree with Rachel on that one line. Other than t...I agree with Rachel on that one line. Other than that, you give good details and their relationship is interesting. Nice!Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-66155002328247888862012-08-21T09:08:56.372-05:002012-08-21T09:08:56.372-05:00This sounds really interesting! The only critique ...This sounds really interesting! The only critique I'd have would be the line "for nine months during her two year. . ." It sounded a bit awkward to me. Maybe just say the last nine months and find another place to say she's been 'human' for two years?<br />I love their banter though! Good job!Rachel Schieffelbeinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-3464992387814269092012-08-21T07:55:38.289-05:002012-08-21T07:55:38.289-05:00so glad you did this! i wanted to hear about your ...so glad you did this! i wanted to hear about your camp nano piece! love it! sooo complicated!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5452907821353988622.post-71239406947835204342012-08-21T06:19:05.553-05:002012-08-21T06:19:05.553-05:00Interesting friendship. I like the playful teasing...Interesting friendship. I like the playful teasing banter they shared. :DClarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06102199553293874800noreply@blogger.com